I just trimmed about 600 words off an older story of mine and tightened it up a bit. That always feels good. Especially since it’s one of my longer ones.
Cutting out whole paragraphs can sometimes be hard, but lately I’ve been fairly ruthless with this. I think first person narrations, or at least mine, are more prone to this kind of inflation and deflation because the conversational tone sometimes leads to unnecessary words, or words that add nothing. So I’ve been trying to take them out.
Precision is my ultimate goal…